Here is the revised document. Here is what I changed:
-Fonts....all of them.
-Less text--more to-the-point.
-Logo! The logo has been incorporated. It is on the design 3 times. I took Art's and Michael's ideas and smashed them together.
-Background circles have been faded to half the brightness they were.
-Map added.
-Pics inserted...they are subject to change.
-Saturdays 6 pm is larger.
-"worship for our generation" added.
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1 comment:
Rachel - great job.
couple random thoughts:
1. Why "Welcome to thehouse" this is for people who've never been it's an ivite card? Can you think of better language than that?
2. Is there a better way to say 20 somethings and 30 somethings?
3. Landscape - Saturday 6 PM - even bigger! ;)
4. Landscape house logo looks out of place. It looks stuck up there. I wonder if you toned down the bacground circles and put it in white somewhere - or lose it eitehr one.
5. Heidi says - Saturday nights 6 PM is redundant - it should just be Saturday 6 PM - what do you think?
6. Landscape - join us in bigger font
Just some ideas
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